Thursday

SORRY MY LOVE

Sorry my love
for misunderstanding your feelings
even though i know you are the best person i had come to know
and the depth of your feelings
the intensity of your thoughts
the longing in your voice
the love in your eyes
the warmth in your hugs
I still remember the lovely moments we spent together
the times we spent fooling around
the times we bunked college
the days when we went for long drives
with nobody to see what where we doing
the times we danced with each other
forgetting what others think about us
the moments you showed care and concern for me
the times you waited for me inspite of me being late
the times you teased me
the times when you complemented me inspite of any reasons
Sorry my love
for misunderstanding your feelings
for misjudging you
for making you wait so long for that single reply
on which your world was stationed.

9 comments:

Mindful Spirit said...

beautifully written.. full of emotions and feel good stuff.. :-)

vb said...

nice attempt....

* મારી રચના * said...

very nicely written.. keep it up...

S said...

There is soo much to write after readin ur post, but don't know what n how to pen it down ! I'm moved ... as this post shakes up my memories too :)

And Sonali, I write too...would like you to visit me @ In love with me and life

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thnks everyone fr lovely comments n i don't write fr money i write coz tht's my passion i don't want it to b measured in monetary gains .

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